The feedback I received on my midterm submission was both positive and negative. The pictures in the magazine were quality, action photos that pertained to the article written. The issue with them is they took up too much space on the pages, and there was not enough room for the article to be written in full detail. The first revision is to make the pictures smaller and make more room for the article on page 4. This is where the problem was most relevant. These pictures margins caused the articles to be too short, which also needs to be fixed. The articles margins need to expand slightly, and the article needs to be slightly longer as well. These fixes pertain to the article, as the TOC was exceptional. The cover photo needed to be shifted slightly to the left, as this would move the person in the picture more centered and look better. These touch up will improve the appearance of the magazine and attract more customers and keep them interested longer.
https://www.canva.com/design/DADugDztOr8/sDzkh2wY8I46PL9CDP-tjQ/view?utm_content=DADugDztOr8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=sharebutton The magazine has not been changed since the 3rd quarter submission, but I believe there were changes that could have been made if not for the Corona Virus and my state lock down orders. The picture on the table of contents was too generic and did not have any action, and I was planning to meet with Carson (the person in all of the pictures) to have another shoot in which I could obtain more photos of him playing. I was hoping to ask him a couple more questions and put more quotes from him into the article. The question I planned to ask were "If golf does not work out, what do you plan to do", "Where do you see yourself in 10 years?" and "What professional golfer/ person do you look up to?". These would have created a friendly interaction that the audience could relate ...
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