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Revision #1

For my revision, I decided to move the title of the article away from the person in the picture, and more into the open space, where there is no action. This allowed me to enlarge the text and see the action of the picture more clearly. It allows the picture to stand out more and the focus shifts more toward the player.
The text in the article was edited to make it look more professional. The first draft had text that did not have any indentations or paragraph separation, so i had to make sure that was fixed. Each paragraph is around the same length, with some shorter and some longer adjusting to the information being given.

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